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Hi, I'm looking for a beta-reader to review my Facts of Life story I am currently writing. It's called "Body Language" and it's based on the first season of FoL, so no Jo/Blair but instead Cindy/Sue Ann. I already have it up on FF.net and currently chapter 24 is up. I had someone beta-read it up to chapter 14, so I'm looking for someone to beta-read it from chapter 15 on.
Main priority would be grammar and punctuation, and in addition story flow and characterization. Knowledge of late-70s/early-80s pop culture is helpful, but not necessary.
I also have another FoL fan-fic going on called "Wedding Bells Are Ringing". This one take place in 2011, and it's Jo/Blair along with Cindy/Sue Ann. The needs are the same as for "Body Language", but it's not my main fanfic right now.
I'm also looking for a beta reader for my Kannazuki no Miko (KnM) fanfic. It's already up on FF.net and currently 21 chapters are up. I need someone who knows the anime/manga VERY WELL and can give ideas as to how to improve the story. I got someone already for the grammar and punctuation part, so that's not much of a concern. The fanfic is a multi-chapter one and it averages around 7,000 words per chapter. Over 130,000 words have been done. So this is a very big fanfic.
Third and final one is a Once and Again fanfic called Deja Vu. Part of it is also based on the late-70s/early-80s time period, so knowledge of that era is a BIG PLUS. Five chapters are already done and the main things are grammar, punctuation, story flow, and characterization.
So please reply back if you want to beta-read either the FoL fanfic, the KnM fanfic, and/or the OaA fanfic
Main priority would be grammar and punctuation, and in addition story flow and characterization. Knowledge of late-70s/early-80s pop culture is helpful, but not necessary.
I also have another FoL fan-fic going on called "Wedding Bells Are Ringing". This one take place in 2011, and it's Jo/Blair along with Cindy/Sue Ann. The needs are the same as for "Body Language", but it's not my main fanfic right now.
I'm also looking for a beta reader for my Kannazuki no Miko (KnM) fanfic. It's already up on FF.net and currently 21 chapters are up. I need someone who knows the anime/manga VERY WELL and can give ideas as to how to improve the story. I got someone already for the grammar and punctuation part, so that's not much of a concern. The fanfic is a multi-chapter one and it averages around 7,000 words per chapter. Over 130,000 words have been done. So this is a very big fanfic.
Third and final one is a Once and Again fanfic called Deja Vu. Part of it is also based on the late-70s/early-80s time period, so knowledge of that era is a BIG PLUS. Five chapters are already done and the main things are grammar, punctuation, story flow, and characterization.
So please reply back if you want to beta-read either the FoL fanfic, the KnM fanfic, and/or the OaA fanfic
